[CS] (One) Esmora

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[CS] (One) Esmora

Post by Xylohem » Fri Jun 22, 2018 8:47 am

Here it is for those of you that want to join!

Character Sheet: (Huzzah! You finally got here!!)

Name:
Age:
Race:
Powers/Magic: (Please be descriptive, and if you add something that is TOO powerful I will have you remove it or edit it.)
Kindgom:
Role: (Rose Guard Initiate, Lord/Prince, Spy)
Scars/Tattoos/Piercings: (Adding a photo would be useful but it is not required.)
Likes:
Dislikes:
Personality:
Biography: (Please be descriptive and include maybe how or why your character has the role you chose for your character.)
Appearance: (You can just describe your character but an image is also very helpful.)

-Also, be creative!! Make your character special! It's more fun that way.-

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Re: [CS] (One) Esmora

Post by Xylohem » Fri Jun 22, 2018 11:25 am

Character Sheet:

Name: The Rose Queen (Her true name is kept secret for her protection. -Anaslyn Xyrleth-)

Age: 326 (Looks 25)

Race: Wood Elf

Powers/Magic:

Elven Life: All Elves have been blessed with long lives with the oldest among them living upwards of ten thousand years, but their long life does not make them invulnerable to diseases and the cutting slice of the sword.

Field of Thorns: With an ability to make whips of thorns in a matter of moments, The Rose Queen and turn a select area into a large patch of thorny vines. While this covers a large distance, nearly thirty meters wide and thirty meters long, it doesn't always do much other than making moving toward her very painful and difficult.

Sea of Petals: If she finds herself in a concerning situation that threatens her life, the Rose Queen can turn her form into rose petals that then quickly begin to float away in the breeze. This is just a minor form of teleportation that can transport her up to fifty meters away. Though if every petal is caught, her teleportation can be directed to a specific place where the petals land.

Wings of the Faerie Queen: After many years of learning and talking with a few Faeries on the continent of Kaleth, the Rose Queen was granted a blessing by the Queen of the Faeries. This ability allows her to grow wings similar to fragile Faerie wings, and they last for a limited number of hours before she must rest to use them again.

Kindgom:

Current - Trivel
Past - Vellidor

Role: The Rose Queen, Head of the Rose Guard

Scars/Tattoos/Piercings:

Earring:
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(The green color is replaced with red.)

Tattoo:
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(Tattoo's placement is on the outer part of her right thigh.)

Scar: She has a scar that runs from the left side of her temple down past her left eye down past her lip to the tip of her chin.

Likes: She enjoys nature, archery, sword training, books, music, and helping her people.

Dislikes: Emperors and rulers that do not put value in the people they rule, liars, cheats, and being a ruler.

Personality: While she is very secretive, this allows her to do what she enjoys, helping her people when she doesn't need to be a Queen. Often during her rule, the Rose Queen has opposed her position as the singular leading figure in the kingdom of Trivel, though she puts up with the situation due to the fact the people of Trivel adore her and continue to ask her to remain as their queen. She is respectful and kind, but just because she is peaceful doesn't mean she had forgotten how to be violent. When provoked to a combat situation she is the first to charge and kill her opponents. She is incredibly lethal on the battlefield as proven in the war for Kaleth.

Biography:

Anaslyn was born to a family who prided themselves in their combat prowess. With this push to become a powerful warrior, Anaslyn spent her early year's training and preparing for combat. Often she would adventure far from her home against the wishes of her father and return with a trophy from a powerful beast. Though, being so versed in battle was not Anaslyn's greatest wish. What she wanted to be was a musician, and often when she left home on her little adventures she would write and experiment with musical instruments. She would never dare show her parents, especially her father, that she was musically inclined. Apparently, the world had other intentions as eventually her father and mother were told about her musical habits.

Her mother was curious and slightly proud that her daughter was smart enough to be a lethal weapon in battle and while playing the lute. This curiosity from her mother helped nullify her father's frustrated rage as Anaslyn began to learn how to be a courtesan. While the court of Vellidor was too far from her reach, one of the nearer Lord's had prepared a court in hopes to find a suitable wife and advisors. Anaslyn's mother saw this as an opportunity to raise her family and teach her daughter how to be cunning when it came to men. Thus the new training began and eventually Anaslyn earned the favor of the Lord.

Though she had little interest in the Lord and bearing his children, she prepared a clever ruse to keep what her mother so desired. After a couple years of clever manipulation, the Lord was cut down and reprimanded by the court of Vellidor for conspiring with another kingdom. This act of treachery was conveniently found by Anaslyn's mother after the Lord had prepared for a far away vacation with his new wife. As recompense, the now-widowed Lady Anaslyn committed herself to the court of Vellidor and her service was accepted. Many years passed as her proud mother and father cherished their positions as both a Lord and Lady due to their daughters cunning. Nearly fifty years later the world shook and the kingdoms became interested in personal preservation.

With the rise of Kaleth, and the new coming war, Anaslyn was seen as a valuable resouce in the new world. To keep the soldiers in line, and keep the kingdom aware of enemy movement. Anaslyn was deemed, the Lady of War and commanded to watch over the battles. In a desperate offensive, Anaslyn and her elite troops were commanded to attack a seemingly insignificant area of Kaleth. Little did she know she was being cast into a suicide mission. Back home, Anaslyn's mother had disclosed the truth of what her daughter had done in hopes to increase her station among the nobles of the Vellidor court. While she did receive a higher station in the court, her daughter was sentenced to death.

As Anaslyn and her troops desperately fought off a horde of troops from the Adrivia Empire a few of her own troops turned against her. It was at this point she realized that her home demanded her blood and death. So she gave it to them. Coaxing the troops of the Adrivia Empire into saving her, she earned their trust and confided in them and the remaining soldiers of her elite troop who were still loyal to her above all. This was the point when Anaslyn died, and the Rose Queen was born. Though at the time her new name was the Rose Warrior.

Appearance:

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(The Rose Queen wears one of two masks, one is in this picture with her pet Faerie Dragon Damaris. Also, the dress she is wearing here is what she wears when she doesn't need to be incredibly fancy.)

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(This is the mask she wears more often.)

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(The dress here is her more fancy dress, though she is able to fight in this dress if she needs.)

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(If she is prepared for a battle, this is what she wears with the golden mask. She rarely fights without her mask. When she is not in combat she will wear the same thing in her kingdom when she wants to help people, in which case she won't wear a mask.)
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Re: [CS] (One) Esmora

Post by Flamma » Sat Jun 23, 2018 2:14 am

Character Sheet: W.I.P

Name: Kaito Nurarihu
Age: 13
Race: human (1/4th elf)
Powers/Magic: Kaito is adept at light magic, perhaps because of his elf blood, though he prefers transformation spells and due to him having been trained since the age of 5 he is good at savoring his magicka. The spells he knows are:
Wizened appearance - This spell contorts light magically around the caster to give them an older appearance(in Kaito's case making him look around 20). The caster can also make them self tall, athletic, fat and ect.
Magnifying glass beam - This spell fires a beam of magical light from the casters eyes that is then reflected back allowing the caster to see everything the light reflected off of, similar to a camera. This spell can also blind an opponent if the caster is making eye contact with his opponent.
Monstrous reflection - The caster of this spell magically contorts light around them to take the appearance of a large beast. The reflection of this beast must stay within 10 feet of the caster but doesn't have to stay directly over them. This effect does not have physical form meaning it can't physically affect its surroundings.

Kindgom: Rose
Role: Prince

Scars/Tattoos/Piercings: none
Likes: Kaito is mischievous, so he loves lying and getting away with it as well as gullible people. He also enjoy's sweets, being praised, showing off his magical abilities and using his magical abilities to trick people, but more then anything Kaito loves it when people call him mature.
Dislikes: Kaito hates bullies who take things too far(meaning pushing and hitting. Kaito can be somewhat of a bully himself without realizing but when it comes to touching someone else that sets him off.
Personality: Kaito usually acts like an immature brat who is selfish, mischievous and playful, but when Kaito has on his wizened appearance spell he Takes on the personality of 'Bastion Nura', The name he gave his wizened appearance to hide who he actually is. The difference between Kaito's personality and his personality while using his wizened appearance spell are like 2 halves of the same coin, both are liars though while Kaito does pranks Bastion lies about his great deeds as a hero. While disguised as Bastion Kaito becomes more calm and calculating since he wants it to be convincing and it often gives him to appearance of being a very calm person and somewhat charming man. Without his wizened appearance though Kaito reverts back to being just as impulsive as most kids his age and rush into things without thinking at all. Ontop of all that Kaito has a hot temper regardless of whether he is Bastion or Kaito, not to mention Kaito is the kind of fighter to bark first and then rush in for the attack.
Biography:
Kaito was raised in the lap o

Appearance:
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His wisened appearance:
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Re: [CS] (One) Esmora

Post by Xylohem » Fri Jun 29, 2018 9:36 pm

Bump...

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Re: [CS] (One) Esmora

Post by Luciid » Thu Jul 26, 2018 6:32 pm

Name: Zinnia Wren

Age: 17

Race: Half-Dragon

Powers/Magic:

Ice-Fire Manipulation
Zinnia is able to manipulate a fire of freezing tempature, a fire so cold, it burns opon contact. She is so skilled, she can even create a blizzard; however, she does have her limits.

Enhanced Condition
Because of the draconic blood in her, Zinnia possesses physical and mental abilities beyond a normal human, but it's only a bit minor.


Telepathy:
Zinnia has the ability to communicate with others telepathically at will.


Shapeshifting:
Zinnia has the ability to hide her draconic features such as her wings and scales to make her appear more human. In fact, she takes the identity of a human.

Kindgom: Trivel

Role: Rose Guard Initiate

Scars/Tattoos/Piercings: She has a quite a few scars, actually. Some are from minor injuries, and the others are the outcome of attempted to remove her scales.

Likes: Zinnia adores her queen and is willing to aid her, no matter what. She sees her as a motherly figure and will do anything, just for her. She is extremely loyal to her friends as well.

In her spare time, Zinnia enjoys exploring nature, singing, and poetry.

Dislikes:Zinnia greatly despises people that slay innocent creatures just for their own gain of pride. Despite being a part of man, herself, she wishes that they were not so full of greed. Of course, she also hates it when her friends (or the queen) are harmed or upset.

Personality: At first glance, Zinnia seems like a timid being. Whenever she's in the company of people, she can tend to be reserved and bashful; although, if you actually get to know her, she's actually quite kind and loyal. She deeply cares for the people she loves and will do anything to aid them, (rapid-firing apologies if she does anything that upsets them).

Biography:
Dragons, one of the most powerful beings in this very land. Most are described as magical beasts to their bones due to their abilities being above comprehension of an normal mortal.

During the ancient times, dragons were more common and lived as a sentient race. Although most roamed free and did not commonly associate with the civilizations of the many other races, they did tend to have special bonds with the humanoid races. Many would pass down their wisdom to others, some were magically linked with the dragons. They lived peacefully with the other races.. until man became full of greed..

To quench their thirst of pride, many would slaughter the innocent beasts for their own gain. Being one of the most powerful beasts on the land, most would gain praise by others. Not long after, the sighting of a dragon was rare.

The dragons prayed to the gods for them to live in peace again. The humans answered their prayers and gifted them with the ability to shapeshift between humanoid and their true dragon forms.

Despite this, many refused to come into contact with the other races. Many stayed hidden instead of associating themselves with the society below them due to their lust and greed.


Zinnia's father, Phaeris, was among one of them. In spite of his race's disdain for the humanoids, he wanted to live among them, not seen as a trophy for their pride.

Though dragons would rarely become involved with their affairs, Phaeris was a benevolent dragon. He cared about the people that cared for others and only lended his respect and services to them. He was friends with a few people, he even fell in love with a female human.

Her name was Evangeline. He came across her while she was looking around for herbs in a forest he was roaming around at the time. She welcomed him with a friendly tone, he could feel purity in her aura.

Being the kindhearted person he was, he offered to help her with her job as a herbalist. She agreed and they lived together, eventually falling in love.

The two ended up having a child. By time she was born, he ran away in guilt. Dragons were never supposed to have children with other people, even at the times they were considered a race. It was considered a burden by them.

Zinnia was not like any "normal" baby. She was born with featherly wings, and a serpentine tail. Considering that her child was an abomination bestowed apon her, she attempted to kill her; however, she ended up sparing the child's life and raised her.

Half-Dragons are even rarer than their draconic parents. Most of the time, they are killed or abandoned by their own parents due to their abnormalities.. Despite being called "burdens" by many, they are as sentient as their draconic parents. Like their parents, they can shapeshift between forms. They can take on the form of a full dragon, but in some cases, they can't control it. There has not been many sightings, but a half-dragon burned down a whole town before due to its stress. It was eventually slain to further prevent the town to be burned.

As Zinnia grew, she learned how to hide her wings and tail to be accepted in the society she was in. For long time, she has even hidden her secret, even from the queen.

Always being dedicated to training, Zinnia saw herself as a potential member of the rose guard. She was an introverted individual, but she felt.. dedicated.

In the end, she eventually became a rose guard.

Appearance:

Human Form: Image

True form: Silver scales are covered around parts of her body, there are even some scars due to the attempts of removing them. A pair of white, feathered wings protrude from her back. A silver tail and a pair of horns can be seen, as well. Her eyes remain the same color as the blue that they are, but her eyes seem more draconic than human.
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Re: [CS] (One) Esmora

Post by Xylohem » Mon Aug 06, 2018 1:16 pm

Infodump!!!
The ability to be a dragon is a little too much power for a HALF-Dragon. Wings are ok for Half-Dragons and so are tails, but the ability to change INTO a DRAGON is OP. A Half-Dragon child would have Draconic traits like scales for skin rather than human flesh, and a tail, and maybe a pair of scaled Draconic wings. Faerie Dragons have wings like Butterfly wings and a few have feather wings.

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Re: [CS] (One) Esmora

Post by Luciid » Sun Aug 12, 2018 10:59 pm

Now looking at it, my character is quite OP. Oof. I'll edit it, if that's fine.

Thanks for telling me, by the way. I didn't think of my character as "OP" until now.

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Re: [CS] (One) Esmora

Post by Xylohem » Sun Aug 12, 2018 11:22 pm

I didn't want to be rude and I'm sorry if I was but if a Dragon was a more common thing then I'd let your character be a Dragon, and mine would be too.

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Re: [CS] (One) Esmora

Post by Luciid » Wed Aug 15, 2018 9:56 am

It's okay. Again, I appreciate that you noted out that my character was OP. You were not being rude for doing so.

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Re: [CS] (One) Esmora

Post by Xylohem » Fri Aug 17, 2018 9:00 pm

I saw the changes you made and that is much more balanced! Nice job. Just tell me when and if you have finished editing your CS and I'll look over it again before we start the RP.

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