[Req] Orandel: Kingdom of Monsters

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Re: [Req] Orandel: Kingdom of Monsters

Post by Monika » Sun Apr 01, 2018 7:05 pm

post the CS here. I use a CS thread for accepted forms. makes it easier to reference people who are accepted as opposed to having to weed through works in progress and whatnot.
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Re: [Req] Orandel: Kingdom of Monsters

Post by AllThatAngst » Sun Apr 01, 2018 7:06 pm

Ah! Gotcha. Thanks for your patience.
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Re: [Req] Orandel: Kingdom of Monsters

Post by AllThatAngst » Sun Apr 01, 2018 7:13 pm

I have read the rules and I accept them.

Name: Lorelei “Lori” Wisteria

True Age: 308

Physical Age: 22

Gender: Female

Species: Werewolf

Occupation: Librarian/Tutor

Rank: N/A

Weapon Expertise: Quarter Staff, Lorelei is quite proficient with this defensive weapon. She shields away from violence however her father demanded she possess some sort of fighting skill with an expertise with at least one weapon in order to be able to protect herself. Once she came of age, her father had one specially made for her.

Personality: Lorelei, commonly and warmly referred to as “Lori”, is an even tempered young woman. Due to her heritage she strives to never lose her head or allow her emotions to get out of control. This being said, Lori is extremely sentimental and sensitive. She becomes nervous easily and tends to daydream. Many things provoke her and she is shy when it comes to sticking up for herself. She hates to be seen as the “Big Bad Wolf” and would hate to lose herself to instinct. This is why Lori did not follow in her father’s footsteps and clung to her studies rather than being a warrior. Lori is a huge nerd and loves to spout random facts that may have no importance. She is very curious and inquisitive, intrigued by simple things but far from simple minded. Lori is never seen without a book in hand. She finds it easy to lose herself with it the pages of a novel, to live as many lives as possible through characters. Reading for her is not always for the purpose of studying, but also personal enjoyment. She is the type of person to treat a book with as much respect as a person: respectfully, kindly, and politely. Lori would be embarrassed to admit it, but she believes books are alive as well, they have personalities, opinions, and thoughts. And she would hate to ever have a book think of her negatively.

Although Lori’s field of study is psychology and sociology, she is well versed in all subjects, such as math, science, history, and literature. Lori chose to focus on these subjects because of her peoples history and where they are now. She hopes for universal peace and equality with no prejudice or discrimination. Lori believes that ignorance is what separates the species and knowledge is the only glue that may pull them together. Lori holds no prejudice against other species and is kind to everyone she meets. Lori judges a person on their actions and words, whether they can keep a promise, and how they treat others. If Lori does get fired up, it will likely lead her to getting red in the face as she battles with her nerves and an old woman lecture full of cliches and scoldings.

Short Bio: Lorelei Wisteria is a descendant from a long line of betas. Her family is well known for being trustworthy, dependable, and selfless. They were always willing to put themselves into the line of fire, for the sake of their people. They were excellent protectors and storytellers. With their influence, the tried to spread the belief of unity and tranquility. They stressed that their kind did not have to be unruly and hot headed beasts, that lycanthropy was not a disease but a gift meant to be used in order to protect each other and others.

Growing up with these ideals, Lori was raised by her grandmother instead of her mother. Her mother was plagued with illness shortly after her birth. Lori was an adventurous tot, always climbing things and straying from the pack. Once she learned how to speak she asked a million questions a minute, eager for knowledge. As a child she picked up the unique ability to spot a liar and her seriousness caused her to be discarded by the children her age. This pushed Lorelei to value education over fighting. While the other children trained for combat and were taught to use their anger against their opponent, Lori sat with her grandmother and listened to the old woman’s stories of star crossed lovers, a vengeful son, and a power hungry human.

Lori was eager for her lessons with her grandmother, which is why her father demanded that between lessons and in order for them to continue, the little girl had to learn how to defend herself. Lori practiced with various weapons: swords, axes, the bow and arrow, and etc— none of them worked for the small girl. After training with her father Lorelei would often return to her lessons with bruises and soreness. This never stopped her, she accepted the need to train her body and mind. Soon her father reached the conclusion that his daughter needed a weapon to emphasize her hesitance towards combat and aggressiveness— a quarter staff. It was practical and useful; Lori could continue with her defensive fighting style and not be slowed down with a heavy weapon that could possibly cut herself.

Young when the war occurred, Lori’s father, Marcelo Wisteria, rose in the ranks once they won, awarded the rank of General once the castle was taken. The castle had an even more extensive library and Lorelei was allowed to continue her education. She continued it alone without the guidance of her grandmother who passed away of old age. Lori uses her abilities as a self proclaimed protector of the library while teaching any students thrown her way.

Extra Info: Lorelei is hiding a stray kitten in the library and regularly feeds it scraps and milk. When her grandmother passed she was given all of her books and an amulet with a wisteria flower enclosed in amber which she always wears around her neck. Lori suffers from dyslexia.

Appearance: Lorelei is a whopping 5’4” with a build mixed with curves and muscle. She is an extreme case of looks can be deceiving considering her size and appearance. Lorelei has glossy onyx colored hair which accents her caramel skin tone nicely. Her round face has large, pale grey eyes surrounded by long, curled lashes. Her small button nose is just as cute as her full and pouty, Cupid’s bow lips. Lorelei keeps her hair short so that it will never bother her when reading. She also has her ears pierced and typically wears simple gold studs which match her wide frame glasses. Underneath her bangs, Lori has a small scar only noticeable from up close from when she was bullied as a child.
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Her eyes change to a glowing amber hue and her coat matches her hair, consisting of shades of black. Lori’s full moon form stands at 6.5ft. with a decent amount of muscle bringing her weight to 250lbs.
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[Req] Orandel: Kingdom of Monsters

Post by Monika » Sun Apr 01, 2018 7:15 pm

wow, I think that's the shortest werewolf form I've seen. lol
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Re: [Req] Orandel: Kingdom of Monsters

Post by AllThatAngst » Sun Apr 01, 2018 7:17 pm

Yeah I thought that would make it comedic since her human form is short as well. I googled the average height for the full moon form and it’s 9-13ft. She’s an outlier. ^-^ If that’s okay.
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[Req] Orandel: Kingdom of Monsters

Post by Monika » Sun Apr 01, 2018 7:22 pm

now, I completely forgot that some people have a different idea than I do about werewolves... but the werewolves I'm using are the classic werewolves. I just wanted to clarify that.
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Re: [Req] Orandel: Kingdom of Monsters

Post by AllThatAngst » Sun Apr 01, 2018 7:25 pm

Could you give an explanation of what your vision of “classic werewolves” is?
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Re: [Req] Orandel: Kingdom of Monsters

Post by Monika » Sun Apr 01, 2018 7:27 pm

yeah, 50's wolfman. the werewolves depicted in most media. bipedal.
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Re: [Req] Orandel: Kingdom of Monsters

Post by AllThatAngst » Sun Apr 01, 2018 7:30 pm

So are the problems with my original character simply the size and wolf photo, or are you displeased with her personality and bio as well?
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[Req] Orandel: Kingdom of Monsters

Post by Monika » Sun Apr 01, 2018 7:33 pm

I actually didn't see a picture, but it's probably because of the app. but everything else was fine.

checked the site. the second form is fine
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