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Post by Jasmine » Sun Nov 05, 2017 1:40 am

Forget it
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Re: [W.I.P] Luna, The Blind Star Fairy

Post by Hurricane Stitchy » Sun Nov 05, 2017 7:15 pm

Star.... fairy? Uhm. Can you please elaborate on her powers? Maybe give examples of the use of The Astronomer and explain where and how she gets stardust?
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Re: [W.I.P] Luna, The Blind Star Fairy

Post by Jasmine » Sun Nov 05, 2017 7:18 pm

Yeah, I’m not done with her yet sooooo.... Yeah xD
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Re: [W.I.P] Luna, The Blind Star Fairy

Post by Hurricane Stitchy » Sun Nov 05, 2017 7:38 pm

Yeah, well, we actually need you to tell us this so we can approve her powers which are currently sounding OP as fuck, sooooo.... yeah. Haha.
Look, your powers sound convoluted and extremely vague. They need to at least be understandable and even if she is a fairy, we've made it clear that we dont want extremely powerful beings involved. Powers need to be realistic.
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Re: [W.I.P] Luna, The Blind Star Fairy

Post by Jasmine » Sun Nov 05, 2017 7:52 pm

That’s why I said I’m not done, I’m still working with her soooo yeah c: That’s why I put wip cause shes’s not done yet
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Post by Hurricane Stitchy » Sun Nov 05, 2017 7:58 pm

Jasmine. I'm simply asking you to explain the powers you wanted to use. Everyone has to. Yours were vague and didnt make sense. Explain then and you're more than welcome to make a star fairy. We a have a talking frog for freak's sake, I'm just asking for some clarification.
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Post by Jasmine » Sun Nov 05, 2017 8:47 pm

I'm gonna post her again when I'm closer to being done cause most of it was empty xD I just don't feel like working on her and having someone either complain or whatever about her when I'm not done cause I get stressed and worried so don't worry! She'll come back
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Post by Shinigami » Tue Nov 07, 2017 9:57 am

Yeah... Jasmine has a habit of working from the outside in. She generally sounds incredibly vague at first, and can often take a while to get to the important details. Her problem, I've noticed, is explaining things. She tends to beat around the bush and/or exaggerate things until she's confronted and worked with.

You'd have had better luck if you'd have worked with her on it and helped her out on the powers/abilities. She has a few characters in one of my RPs, and I've helped her directly on more than one occasion. If you let her post it up again, I'll work with her on it and get it in working condition.
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Post by Trandafir » Tue Nov 07, 2017 11:08 am

Our concern when questioning her abilities, for being such an important point for your character (as it is for every character) was to avoid wasting your time in case you got the entire cs done and had to change her core. In any case, it wasn't the staff's intention to decline the character, as it was a wip. Of course, you're welcome to post her again. We'll evaluate her once the CS is completed this time
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