[CS] Plight (Accepting 3)

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[CS] Plight (Accepting 3)

Post by Hilo Takenaka » Thu Mar 15, 2018 6:38 am

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Re: [CS] Plight (Accepting 3)

Post by Cupcake » Fri Mar 16, 2018 2:44 am

Name: Icy Cupcake
Age: 17
sex: Female
Appearance: Her dark curly purple hair that go down to her shoulder. There are different color of sprinkles in her hair. Her eye is a very light purple eyes. she have a baby face witch make her look younger. she is always wear her cheerleader outfit with is kinda like a sport bra with a minni skirt. The are the same color as her eye. She always wear boot on her feet. she is 5ft7in in height. she is the perfect weight
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cheerful. Sweet,loving,caring intelligence
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She lost her mother in a war so her father take her and her siblings out in the middle of nowhere. He through it would be smart to experience on his children to make them live. he put zombie DNA in cupcake.then vampire DNA in candy. werewolf in muffin.he kill his little child name Chocolate which is a ghost for know on

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Re: [CS] Plight (Accepting 3)

Post by Hilo Takenaka » Sat Mar 17, 2018 9:51 am

Unfortunately, Icy Cupcake has been denied for several reasons

1. Your character’s backstory not only has no relation to the plot, nor does it work in the established lore and universe the roleplay is set in.
2. The way you presented your application is quite low in quality. In addition to the couple of spelling and grammatical errors, this roleplay is in the advanced category, therefore high-quality applications are expected to be written. Unfortunately, areas such as your personality and your character’s bio could use a bit more work

Whilst you can’t submit this character again, you may be able to submit another character. However, please take time and care into your next application.
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