[Req] Age of Heroes

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Re: [Req] Age of Heroes

Post by Rossegarde » Sun Nov 04, 2018 4:03 pm

You sir/madame, clearly underestimate the power of hormones. Plus I think some children do grow to their full height by a young age and never just grow. Also the power ranking, yeah I forgot about that. I thought he was a extremely high B, high A, and low S. shrug
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Re: [Req] Age of Heroes

Post by Quintillian » Sun Nov 04, 2018 4:26 pm

I didn't really think to make a his powers a rank B or above. I just didn't want to make him seem overpowered. I guess his height may be wrong too; I didn't think to take account teenage hormones and i just gave him a random height. :/

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Re: [Req] Age of Heroes

Post by PenParkour » Sun Nov 04, 2018 5:07 pm

This still open? Making a CS right now if it is.
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Re: [Req] Age of Heroes

Post by Tr0llz0r » Sun Nov 04, 2018 5:22 pm

Made a quick edit to add something I thought I already had, which is a power he unlocks when he reaches A-B rank.
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Re: [Req] Age of Heroes

Post by Rossegarde » Sun Nov 04, 2018 6:07 pm

Oh, uh, mate, I wasn't talking about your character. Your CS looks fine, I'm talking about mine. Sorry for the misunderstanding. I don't know if I should make him an S or A.
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Re: [Req] Age of Heroes

Post by Tr0llz0r » Sun Nov 04, 2018 7:00 pm

Are you talking to me?
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Re: [Req] Age of Heroes

Post by TriggerHappy » Sun Nov 04, 2018 7:21 pm

No, they were talking to Quintillian
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Re: [Req] Age of Heroes

Post by PenParkour » Sun Nov 04, 2018 8:18 pm

-Student File-

Name - Benjamin “Ben” Braddock

Age - 18

Nationality - American

Powers -

Human-Spider Physiology:

Benjamin Braddock possesses the proportionate powers and capabilities of several species of spiders, granted to him at birth. Ever since his conception, Braddock’s cellular structure underwent numerous mutagenic changes, granting him an granting him superhuman strength, speed, toughened flesh, and numerous arachnid-like abilities as well as an enhanced chromosome pattern. His physiology and anatomy have been severely altered as a result. The origin of this mutation is currently unknown.

Wall-Crawling:
Benjamin Braddock’s mutations have induced a mutagenic, cerebellum-wide alteration of his engrams resulting in the ability to mentally control the flux of inter-atomic attraction (electrostatic force) between molecular boundary layers via tiny hair-like extensions across his body. This overcomes the outer electron shell's normal behavior of mutual repulsion with other outer electron shells and permits the tremendous potential for electron attraction to prevail. The mentally controlled sub-atomic particle responsible for this has yet to be identified. This ability to affect the attraction between surfaces is so far limited to Benjamin's body (especially concentrated in his hands and feet) and another object, with an upper limit of several tons per finger. The hairs on his hands and feet are able to become hydrophobic, allowing him to travel or slide across water.

Superhuman Strength:
Benjamin’s hyper-muscular structure enables him to lift several tons. However, due to his altered anatomy, Benjamin also possesses the ability to manipulate his own blood pressure, similar to the jumping spider, and assists him in lifting or moving huge and difficult objects as well as enhancing his overall strength. This unique ability along with his strength also extends into his legs, allowing him to leap higher and farther than most other superhumans who rely on strength alone to make large leaps and bounds.

Superhuman Speed:
Benjamin is capable of running and moving at speeds that are far beyond the natural physical limits of the finest human athlete, able to keep pace with automobiles and other similar ground-based vehicles. Benjamin is able to maneuver and accelerate to speeds faster than the human-eye can follow, often appearing as a blur.

Superhuman Stamina:
Benjamin's hyper-advanced musculature produces less fatigue toxins during physical activity than an ordinary human. This allows him to exert himself physically for much longer periods of time before fatigue begins to impair him. At his peak, Ben can physically exert himself at his peak capacity for several hours before the build up of fatigue toxins in his blood begins to impair him. It is possible he could operate at peak physical exertion for an entire 24 hours before the toxins take an adverse or severe effect on him. Ben can also hold his breath for about eight minutes or more.

Superhuman Durability:
Benjamin's body is physically tougher and more resistant to certain types of physical injury than the body of an ordinary human, though he's far from invulnerable. His body is more resistant to impact forces than anything else. He can withstand great impacts, such as falling from a height of several stories or being struck by an opponent with super strength. Most injuries that severely harm or kill a normal human leave Ben with little to no discomfort or injury to himself. His skin has adapted to be similar to that of a spider's with two layers: an epidermal carapace and softer tissue underneath. The outer tissue is primarily able to absorb the brunt of piercing damage while the secondary layer primarily absorbs concussive damage.

Superhuman Agility:
Benjamin's agility, balance, and bodily coordination are all enhanced to levels that are far beyond the natural physical limits of the finest human athlete. Spider-Man is extraordinarily limber and his tendons and connective tissues are twice as elastic as the average human being. He has the combined agility and acrobatic prowess of the most accomplished circus aerialists and acrobats. He can also perform any complicated sequence of gymnastic stunts such as flips, rolls, and springs. He is able contort any segment of his body almost unnaturally into nearly any shape he sees fit to avoid bodily harm to himself.

Superhuman Equilibrium:
Benjamin Braddock possesses the ability to achieve a state of perfect equilibrium in any position imaginable, especially with the assistance of his adhesive abilities. He is able to adjust his position by instinct, which enables him to balance himself on virtually any object, no matter how small or narrow.

Superhuman Reflexes:
Ben's reflexes are enhanced, being superior to those of the finest human athlete, and are currently about forty times greater than those of an ordinary human. In combination with his spider-sense, the speed of his reflexes allows him to dodge almost any attack, or even gunfire, depending on the distance.

Altered Vision:
Braddock's visual acuity is considerably beyond that of a normal human. O'Hara can see objects at much greater distances, with perfect clarity, relative to an ordinary human. O'Hara possesses this same level of clarity at night, enabling him to see in near-complete darkness. It is possible that he is able to see into the infra-red end of the electromagnetic spectrum, enabling him to see a person's body heat. The flicker-fusion horizon (the speed at which some objects appear as a blur) in his eyes is superior to other people. What appears as a blur to most people, he can see perfectly. His vision also gives him the ability to see energy waves.

Regenerative Healing Factor:
Benjamin is able to rapidly heal and regenerate from harm rapidly faster and more extensively than normal humans are capable of and can rapidly heal and regenerate from harm that normal humans cannot heal from. Benjamin's genetically-enhanced metabolism and physiology affords him the self-healing ability that allows to him regenerate damaged bodily tissues at a highly-accelerated rate, including injuries such as slashes or puncture wounds that can heal completely within a matter of a few minutes. However, if hasn't been proven if Benjamin can regrow an entire limb similar to his spider brethren, but he isn't in any hurry to find out.

Enhanced Immune System:
Due to his accelerated metabolism, Benjamin has a higher tolerance for drugs and diseases than normal humans, and he can recover from the effects of larger doses rapidly. His immune system also allows him to adapt and develop a complete immunity from a disease or drug after recovering from it, rendering the drug useless against him for the future.

Spinnerets/Poisonous Glands:
Benjamin is able to produce webbing via glands in his wrists and ankles that allow him to release strong-adhesive silk-webbing. While Benjamin can produce various types of webbing, such as a foam-like webbing, paste-like webbing, and various retardant and insulated webs, his main type of webbing has properties similar to Darwin's Bark Spider, an orb-weaver spider able to produce the toughest biological material ever studied, over ten times tougher than a similarly-sized piece of Kevlar. Benjamin can also lace his webbing with a neurotoxin that can paralyze and even kill his opponents if given a large enough dose. He is also able to alter the pigmentation of his webbing, able to even make glow-in-the-dark webbing. Spooky.

Spider Sense:
Benjamin possesses an extrasensory "danger" or "spider" sense which warns him of potential immediate danger by the manifestation of a tingling sensation in the back of his skull, and links with his superhuman kinesthetics, enabling him to evade most any injuries, unless he cognitively overrides his automatic reflexes. This is most likely due to the miniature hairs along his entire body, allowing him to detect even the most minute of disturbances. It also appears to endow him occasionally with a simultaneous clairvoyant response to a wide variety of phenomena, which has given several hundredths of a second warning, which is sufficient time for his reflexes to allow him to avoid injury. The sense also can create a general response on the order of several minutes: he cannot discern the nature of the threat by the sensation. He can, however, discern the severity of the danger by the strength of his response to it. Ben's spider-sense is directional and can guide him to or away from hidden weapons and enemies. Sudden and extreme threats can cause his spider-sense to react with painful intensity. Braddock can also sense and dodge attacks directed randomly or by an artificial intelligence. Using his spider-sense to time his enhanced reflexes, Benjamin can casually dodge attacks up to and including automatic-weapons fire, provided there is sufficient distance. His spider-sense is sufficiently well-linked to his reflexes to the point that a threat can trigger them even when Spider-Man is asleep or stunned. His spider-sense also oddly alerts him to observers or cameras within his vicinity. The cause of this is uncertain. The spider-sense is so sensitive it is able to detect threats even from those whom Benjamin does not consider a threat and is able to discern whether someone is being deceptive. His spider sense is able to guide him through deceit and illusions alike, and, if rendered blind, can guide him via increasing the sensitivity of his hairs to vibrations. His body begins to produce more adrenaline after the sense is triggered, an extension of the 'fight or flight syndrome.'

Power Rank - B

Personality -
  • Introvert, often keeps to himself
  • Once he has opened up to someone, he displays a more extroverted personality
  • Displays a knack for engineering
  • Is the good-Samaritan type, sometimes hindered by his social anxiety
  • When nervous or anxious, rubs the back of his neck or runs his hand through his hair
  • Hates when people yell or use foul language, it's a pet peeve of his
  • Understanding and encouraging
  • Has a slightly mischievous side to him
  • Still has a silent fear of his own power, despite his apparent mastery and confidence over it
  • Aspires to reach S or at least A-rank before he graduates
Bio -

Benjamin Braddock wasn't born as an ordinary child. Before he could even crawl, he was sticking to things. Proved to be a real hassle in the hospital when he clung onto the nurse and wouldn't get off her. After displaying hardened skin and the ability to wall-crawl, Benjamin’s parents and the specialists were shocked to discover that Benjamin was in fact a superhuman. However, neither of his parents knew where his powers came from as no one in the either parents' families had displayed any supernatural abilities.

After that, it was many sleepless nights for his parents as he soon as he learned to wall-crawl. Seriously. He crawled everywhere. The ceiling, under tables, up shelves, the roof of the house. Anywhere and everywhere was the toddler's playground. It only got worse when he grew older and discovered the use of his spinnerets. Webbing. Webbing everywhere. His strength didn't become apparent until he was older, around the age of 10, when confronting another superhuman child over the bullying of another child. Benjamin sent the other child hurtling across the playground yard as a result, frightening not only everyone around him but also himself. His parents and teachers reprimanded the young spider-boy. From then on, his parents sent him to several specialists to help the young human-spider control his gifts.

However, as he grew older, it became more difficult for him to understand and control his increasing strength and abilities even with the help and guidance of his parents and doctors. When his parents couldn't help him anymore, he was turned over to the GHAU at a younger age than most in order that he may receive the best help and guidance he needed in order to safely participate in classes and avoid any further "accidents".

Now, he's just your average star-student. Stellar grades. Amazing talent. Sound character and mind. Even participates in the local food drive. He also keeps constant contact with his parents and younger sister. Hopefully, he can get an A or S rank before he graduates. And maybe a nice girl, too. That would be a definite plus.

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Re: [Req] Age of Heroes

Post by TriggerHappy » Sun Nov 04, 2018 9:12 pm

So long as he can't avoid any and all injury, or stop threats we may encounter with little to no difficulty, you should be fine
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Re: [Req] Age of Heroes

Post by PenParkour » Sun Nov 04, 2018 9:22 pm

TriggerHappy wrote:
Sun Nov 04, 2018 9:12 pm
So long as he can't avoid any and all injury, or stop threats we may encounter with little to no difficulty, you should be fine
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