[REQ] [F] Heroes of Our Time

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Re: [REQ] [F] Heroes of Our Time

Post by TheDarkOne » Fri Aug 10, 2018 4:48 pm

Accepted. And my apologies, I would just prefer it that way otherwise some characters could just peace out. Feel free to use powers to pull things into the world, the characters can't be able to leave though.

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Re: [REQ] [F] Heroes of Our Time

Post by FUCK » Fri Aug 10, 2018 9:08 pm

Yeah, I fixed it.

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Re: [REQ] [F] Heroes of Our Time

Post by mochi » Sat Aug 11, 2018 12:32 am

Everyone else: does really cool stuff.
Nic: gets hit in the head and dies.

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Re: [REQ] [F] Heroes of Our Time

Post by FUCK » Sat Aug 11, 2018 2:22 am

If it makes you feel better I was gonna teleport to another dimension so I could get cooler but "dad" said no😝

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Re: [REQ] [F] Heroes of Our Time

Post by TheDarkOne » Sat Aug 11, 2018 12:39 pm

And everyone should always obey their parents.

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Re: [REQ] [F] Heroes of Our Time

Post by FUCK » Sat Aug 11, 2018 4:14 pm

@Mochi you should add to your post so you at least go see what's happening. You kinda just write that your character wants to help and then don't do anything which makes me think why should I care that she wants to help. At this point if someone else we're to help instead of Nic then it would only make your character feel worse which wouldn't really help the story especially so early on, but because she isn't moving that's kinda all that could happen.

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Re: [REQ] [F] Heroes of Our Time

Post by Orophin » Sat Aug 11, 2018 7:30 pm

I hope that my post was OK.

Also, I was curious, has anyone heard anything from Xcelgamer? Because I've seen them on but they haven't posted anything here for a few days now. Are they still involved with this?
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Re: [REQ] [F] Heroes of Our Time

Post by FUCK » Sat Aug 11, 2018 8:02 pm

Just ask, there's nothing ruder then just disappearing without saying anything but if you don't ask you can't be sure.

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Re: [REQ] [F] Heroes of Our Time

Post by FUCK » Sat Aug 11, 2018 8:04 pm

Oh nevermind, thought you were dark one. I'll ask her/him then.

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Re: [REQ] [F] Heroes of Our Time

Post by mochi » Sat Aug 11, 2018 11:03 pm

Mostly I’m not entirely sure what’s happening myself which is why I cut it short lmao. But Nic has also never been in a situation quite like this so for me it makes sense that she’d freeze up. I enjoy writing characters with flaws, flaws that might cost them, and also character development that generally goes up. She’ll get better. But for now? She’s just kinda lost and scared. That’s all I was going for. It’s not like she has healing powers, anyway, so her showing up would kinda just be useless.

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