[OOC] The Runaways

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[OOC] The Runaways

Post by Venus » Thu Dec 13, 2018 9:09 pm

I CALL NUMBER 626 AND IF YOU KNOW WHERE ITS FROM ILY
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Re: [OOC] The Runaways

Post by Veilstar » Thu Dec 13, 2018 9:40 pm

Ohana means family and family means no one left behind ^-^
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Re: [OOC] The Runaways

Post by Venus » Thu Dec 13, 2018 9:56 pm

YES

HERE HAVE THIS BROWNIE

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Re: [OOC] The Runaways

Post by Veilstar » Thu Dec 13, 2018 10:19 pm

Yay!!
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Re: [OOC] The Runaways

Post by Moddy » Thu Dec 13, 2018 11:28 pm

Not gonna lie, that brownie looks disgusting
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Re: [OOC] The Runaways

Post by Venus » Fri Dec 14, 2018 4:40 am

It was made with the blood and souls of my male slaves
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Re: [OOC] The Runaways

Post by InquisitorRothus » Fri Dec 14, 2018 4:44 am

Hm... Not bad. Next time, mix in a pinch of salt. It does wonders.
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Re: [OOC] The Runaways

Post by Moddy » Fri Dec 14, 2018 5:04 am

anotherbabyrose wrote:
Fri Dec 14, 2018 4:40 am
It was made with the blood and souls of my male slaves
I...

I almost name dropped...

I almost started controversy...
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Re: [OOC] The Runaways

Post by Venus » Fri Dec 14, 2018 5:31 am

Star, I have a few problems with two of your character’s abilities ><

With the Floral Nenny, I feel like “summoning” is more of a magical term. And I want these characters to be more on the superhuman scale rather than supernatural. You also packed like three abilities into the one
1) It being an extension of her senses, that allows her to tell exactly where things are and describe in exact detail everything about the area around them. (Id allow this if it weren’t so detailed.. if you limited it to her being able to only sense where things are id let it slide)
2) the petals being able to take a razor sharp edge
3) Being able to merge them together as a sort of wall, blocking attacks

I understand they’re basically just little things of energy, but I can’t allow them to be able to do that much. Also I really dislike the term “summoning” for this rp... but now I’m just being picky. So basically just settle on one thing of the three. I’d even allow 1 and 2, with the limitations on 1.

And finally, we come to her ability Override. This one I simply can’t allow. It’s not only completely out of the blue, I don’t understand how petals of energy could hack into technology. You could twist it to she can use the petals of energy to over power and destroy technology. Like atms, bulbs, radios, etc. That’d make more sense because it’s energy. But hacking and controlling technology doesn’t really making sense imo.

That’s basically it. The rest of her CS looks good.
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Re: [OOC] The Runaways

Post by Monika » Fri Dec 14, 2018 5:34 am

is mine looking ok?
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