[REQ] You Don't Belong Here

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[REQ] You Don't Belong Here

Post by Maxx[2.0]ine » Sat Apr 11, 2020 1:02 am

Do you ever feel like you just wanna scream? For no reason at all? Wishing you could just climb to the top of the highest hill you can find, and scream until all thoughts fade from your mind, all feeling fades from your body…

Does it ever leave you feeling disconnected, like you don't belong here? Do you look at the people around you, knowing who they are but seeing them as strangers? Feeling like you shouldn't be here…

What if there is a reason for it?

Maybe you don't belong here.




…This idea was developed from a sudden feeling I had. A brief moment of disconnection from reality. I don't know what caused it, but it gave me the idea for this… Heh.

The basic idea, is that our characters all feel like this. Maybe it's all the time, maybe it's only some of the time. They may choose to hide these feelings, but that doesn't change it: they can't just turn their feelings off.

The reason they feel they don't belong? I'm not entirely sure about that yet. My favorite idea for that at the moment is that they're artificial humans. Created in a lab, but tossed out for not being perfect. Having some kind of flaw. They don't know this about themselves, but that's the reason they feel they don't belong. Because really, they don't.

That's just a rough idea, though. If you're interested in this, leave a reply! If you've got any questions, leave a reply! If you've got any suggestions, leave a reply!

If this does generate enough interest, I'll set up everything else. ^-^



CS Template
This is a modified version of CS template made by Killer Ice Cream. You don't have to fill in every single bit if you don't want to, but it would be helpful still, lol.

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Appearance
Hair:
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Height:
Weight:

Personality:
Positive traits:
Negative traits:

Attributes
Strength: 1-10 (example: 1 is child-like wimpyness and ten is Olympic athlete strength, same goes for the rest of the attributes respectively)
Speed: 1-10
Agility: 1-10
Intelligence: 1-10
Stamina: 1-10
Communication: 1-10

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I'll put the links to the different things here, for convenience, lol.

CS Thread
https://rp-forums.net/viewtopic.php?f=21&t=15315

OOC Thread
https://rp-forums.net/viewtopic.php?f=23&t=15316

RP Thread
https://rp-forums.net/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=15322
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Re: [REQ] You Don't Belong Here

Post by Killer Ice Cream » Sat Apr 11, 2020 1:25 am

I absolutely love it.

You know, when I first started reading it felt like maybe they were aliens that were planted her by their parents for some reason.

But I like the artificial thing too, though I would imagine if they weren't wanted wouldn't they be killed or tossed in the garbage? Maybe I'm over thinking it lol
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Post by Maxx[2.0]ine » Sat Apr 11, 2020 1:32 am

Lol. I'm thinking, that the scientist/s who made them are trying to construct the perfect human. And so they've got to let the experiments/subjects live and grow until they're able to see if it worked. And then when they see the flaws, whatever they may be, they toss them out. Probably giving them to some orphanage or something, when they were too young to remember any of it.

I really like the alien idea you said about now, though, lol. I might steal that for a 1x1 plot, lol.
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Re: [REQ] You Don't Belong Here

Post by Killer Ice Cream » Sat Apr 11, 2020 1:35 am

Absolutely, go for it. I love everything aliens honestly.

And that actually filled in the holes I saw.

That's actually a really good plot so far!
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Re: [REQ] You Don't Belong Here

Post by Killer Ice Cream » Sat Apr 11, 2020 1:38 am

And maybe there is this big organization attached to this to cover it up, like it's an adoption and fostering agency and they sell these artificial children on the side as like, an illegal way of making a lot of money.
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Re: [REQ] You Don't Belong Here

Post by Maxx[2.0]ine » Sat Apr 11, 2020 1:41 am

I'm glad you pointed out the holes, or I would never have thought to fill them in. And I'm glad you like it!

And that's a brilliant idea. I'll give it some thought, working out the best way for it to work and everything, while I sort everything else out tomorrow (well, technically later).

Would you be okay with me stealing and modifying the CS template you used for Bright Eyes Dull World? I saw it when I was glancing over that thread, and I think, which a few modifications, it would be perfect for this.
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Re: [REQ] You Don't Belong Here

Post by Killer Ice Cream » Sat Apr 11, 2020 1:45 am

Of course you can! I'm glad you liked it, I honestly love designing CS templates for different stories. It's almost more fun than actually creating a character.
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Post by Maxx[2.0]ine » Sat Apr 11, 2020 1:49 am

I love creating characters, but not so much designing CS templates, lol. I just find it really hard to come up with anything good most of the time, so I just go with my usual three or four line template.
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Re: [REQ] You Don't Belong Here

Post by Killer Ice Cream » Sat Apr 11, 2020 1:52 am

I'm always here to help out then! ^¬^
I've got the basic, the multispecies, the inclusive, the multidimensional, the whole shebang. Even a template for futuristic pirates!
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Re: [REQ] You Don't Belong Here

Post by Maxx[2.0]ine » Sat Apr 11, 2020 2:05 am

I know who to come to when I need CS templates then, lol.
I'll sort out the rest of the stuff for this when I wake up, because I really should be going to sleep now, lol.
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