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Re: [CS] Guardians Of Magic

Post by Veilstar » Sun Apr 01, 2018 1:39 am

We do have to eventually take on a whole empire after all.
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Re: [CS] Guardians Of Magic

Post by KittycatCookie » Sun Apr 01, 2018 2:16 am

Name:
🐇 Carrot

Nickname(s):
🐇 Fluffbutt

Age:
🐇 23

Gender:
🐇 Female

Sexual Orientation:
🐇 Pansexual

Race:
🐇 Taguel / Rabbit

Previous Occupation:
🐇 Caretaker

Inventory:
🐇 Carrots
🐇 Staff: Snow Tear
The staff itself doesn’t actually own magic, other than a spell to repel unwanted users. The staff helps control her powers.
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Magic / Skills:
🐇 Ice Generation
The ability to create ice out of thin air by freezing the water particles in the air and forcing them into one place.
🐇 Ice Manipulation
The ability to form and bend ice at her will.
🐇 Resistance to the Cold
The natural resistance to the cold.
🐇 Empathy
The ability to understand and share the feelings of another.
🐇 Housewife
Having helped out her mother from a young age on, Carrot has great cooking, baking and cleaning abilities, like a good housewife.

Personality:
🐇 Carrot is a caring and chipper rabbit, hoping to make everyone happy. She loves flirting for fun and would only stop once she has found a partner. But when it comes to love, the girl is incredibly oblivious, often missing obvious hints! She really cares about her looks, and cute things are her favorite thing, ever! She can often be seen brushing her hair or fixing it otherwise.

Fears:
🐇 Tight spaces
🐇 Being alone

Backstory:
🐇 Carrot has lived a simple life, growing up in a loving family with 8 brothers, being the only girl she had felt even more feminine but also enjoyed more typically male activities. She had the luck of being pretty, giving her an advantage. Often she found herself surrounded by boys, but her brothers always protected her as she had no interest in someone like that. In fact, she never let her popularity let her feel better than anyone else. She even caught the heart of the prince of her folk, yet she rejected him as she felt that someone as simple as her should not marry royalty, she didn't love him the way he loved her.

Appearance:
🐇 Carrot is curvy and 5’5 tall. She is quite charming and attractive and uses that to her advantage.
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Extra:
🐇 Carrot is a great cook and she loves baking!
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Re: [CS] Guardians Of Magic

Post by HoneyBuzz » Sun Apr 01, 2018 4:18 pm

Name:
Naliana

Nickname(s):
Nali
Nala

Age:
26

Gender:
Female

Sexual Orientation:
Pansexual

Race:
Leones

Previous Occupation:
Queen

Inventory:
A spear, handed down through generations of the Royal Family. It is a vessel for Naliana's Magic.
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A gold necklace with a Ruby Pendant, which seems to be stuck on her skin.
A few ancient scrolls, all in her native tongue.

Magic/Skills:
Lion's Roar
Slamming her spear into the ground, A small wave of sound, similar to a Lion's Roar, explodes out from around her. It can knock down/Incapacitate enemies, but it also hurt's Naliana as well.
Shadow Manipulation
Naliana can control and manipulate the shadows, morphing them into shapes to help her. Hands, strange creatures, whatever is useful in the situation. She can't do anything big, though, or else she becomes exhausted and injured.
Night Vision
Thanks to her Feline Genes, Naliana can see in the dark perfectly. Shine a flashlight in her eyes, though, and she looks like a demon.
Lion Traits
Naliana is almost completely silent when she walks or runs, and she can eat raw food with little to no problem. (Although she prefers a good cooked meal.)
Last Resort
In the event that Naliana gets into a situation with no escape, she can funnel all/almost all of her life force into her spear. It creates a massive golden bubble-like structure that spreads out, incapacitating everyone it touches (Save for those near Naliana). If she were to use it, she would die or be forced into a Coma-Like state until her body can fix the damage done.

Personality:
Naliana is a proud woman, with a smile as bright as the sun. She is protective over friends and family, and will fight tooth and claw for what she believes in. Once her mind is set to something, Naliana never stops until whatever it is, is achieved. She is stubborn and extremely hot-headed, and get's annoyed very quickly. Naliana isn't the type of woman you'd want to mess with, as she stops at nothing to humiliate and hurt her enemies. She holds grudges for almost all her life, but sometimes if she likes you, she'll let it slide. She's a bit of a smart-ass, making dumb yet somehow funny comments from time to time. She has a flirtatious nature to her, making flirty jokes or just flirting in a playful and harmless way. She often treats friends like family, giving them everything she can to make sure they're safe and comfortable. Naliana has an extreme hatred for anyone who tries to put her down, especially by insulting her race or her looks. She can become violent, doing everything in her power to make sure those who wronged her suffer greatly.

Fears:
Heights
Cages
Losing her friends and family
Not being enough

Backstory:
Naliana was born under the strangest of circumstances. Unlike the rest of her people, born under the sign of the sun, Naliana was born in the dead of night; A supposed 'ill omen'. Despite her strange birth and even stranger appearance, Naliana was not so easily abandoned by her parents, as most 'Moon Children' were; Due to the fact that she was the only heir to the Leones throne. Her birth was considered the worst of luck, but Naliana never truly considered herself to be any different than the rest of her people. As she grew up, learning how to do what every Queen was expected, the others soon began to accept her. Seeing how promising she had become, many of the Elders began to accept the fact that perhaps Moon Children weren't so ill-fated, after all. Her birth was a sign of a movement; It once was that if a child were to be born underneath the moon, they should be discarded, lest the parents face dishonor and exile. Now, since the only future queen was a Moon Child, the times had changed drastically. As Naliana grew, she began to appreciate her birth, and her own personal history. Even though she was the 'Princess', so to speak, Naliana was still ostracized by the children around her. They would mock her, and often exclude her from various activities because they didn't want to be 'cursed'. So, instead of socializing like a normal child, Naliana turned to books and ancient text to find comfort in. She would read, almost constantly, gaining knowledge on things no child should know. This manifested into her being able to control the magic that was gifted to her by the Moon; Shadow Magic. She kept this hidden, of course, fearful that her deviation from light and fire could have her exiled. In fact, she kept it hidden until she needed it most.
At the age of 23, Naliana became Queen. Given the crown and Spear, she was proclaimed one of the most anticipated Queen's of the Leones' History. She didn't pride herself in this fact at all; The only reason she was popular was because her enemies wished to see her fail. Nobody wanted a Moon Child as Queen, but she was adamant to prove them wrong. So, she quickly set to work making sure no child would be tossed into the hot sands, just for their birth time. The feedback from such a change was well received, and she quickly became liked by most of her subjects. She refused to stop there, and began instating things that would keep her people safe from the harmful ways of the past, and from the harm of other races who wished war against them. Her rule was short lived, as only a few years later, the Yaran Empire came knocking on her doorstep. Their demands were simple enough, yet all the same humiliating. They demanded that Naliana be brought to the Capital and become a trophy; A symbol of the Empire's might. Surely if they could conquer such a 'fearsome' race, they could easily due so to all others. Naliana refused, claiming that the only way she would put a foot in their palaces was to kill her. And they tried. Naliana and her army fought valiantly, but it was not enough to hold off the massive forces that the Empire had sent. She quickly sent her remaining people to the south, telling them to hide in the safe Haven and await for her return. Then, she was captured. Luckily though, as she was being transported to the Emperor's Palace, she was freed. Naliana hid herself in the nearby forest, and has been desperately trying to escape to the south to see her people once again.

Appearance:
Naliana is approximately 5'8", with a long mane of white hair. Her skin is pale and smooth, with a few freckles on her nose and shoulders. She has a black tail due to her magic, which has little star-like sparkles in its fur, and two fluffy white lion ears on her head. She is the last of her kind still in the north, and the only one who is 'albino'.
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Naliana often wears a crown on her head, which seems almost permanently there due to magic.
Her Cosmic Tail is seen 24/7, but it's more noticeable at night or in the shadows.
Her pupils are Feline shaped slits, and they change with the amount of light. Her irises do kind of glow in the dark.
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Re: [CS] Guardians Of Magic

Post by KittycatCookie » Sun Apr 01, 2018 4:54 pm

The only thing i dislike is how, pardon, "special" she is by being the only albino of her race.. the cosmic tail bugs me a bit as (I know, the illustration..) but is fine as long as it doesn't give her any abilities having to do with space (since her forté seems to be shadow/darkness magic after all). I would prefer it if you aged her up a bunch of years since she is a queen and in this universe, where people dont die at the age of 40 like they did in medieval times, it would be more appropriate to have a more mature queen. I.e., empire knights have to at leastleast be 24, so I would prefer it if you kept your queen 25 or older for logical reasons.

If you have anything you'd like to say about what I said feel free, I'm happy to discuss some things

Tl;dr:
Im not sure if you meant she is the only albino in the entire kingdom
Her tail can stay but please no added 'cosmic' abilities for that
Please consider aging her up just like 3 years or so. It doesn't have much influence on the story anyways so it shouldn't be a big fighting point haha, I just want it to make sense in the lore.


Other than those 3 things, i love your character!
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Re: [CS] Guardians Of Magic

Post by Veilstar » Sun Apr 01, 2018 4:55 pm

Name: Velouria Aegis

Nickname(s): Velo, Ria

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Sexual Orientation: Bisexual (leans a little more towards women though)

Race: Human

Previous Occupation: Former Yaranian Knight.

Inventory: A jade necklace of a sword with twin dragons wrapped around it. A small coin pouch in her boots. Rest of it has been confiscated.

Magic / Skills:
Martial Combat: Being a member of the Yaran empire Velouria has been taught using a variety of weapons. From the sword to the mighty axe. Her preferred weapon would be a spear.

Map reading: Knows how to properly read a map and tell where one is located on it.

Historical knowledge: Knows a great deal about multiple kingdoms, people's, and their unique cultures.

Personality: Velouria has always been known for her curious and forgiving nature. One would think she'd be a better scholar than a soldier. You don't get to chose where you go when you join the empire sadly. She's one brave lass though willing to fade any foe that is in the way of her freedom. One could also say she's idealist, meaning she likes to question why things have to be the way they are. She wants to make a change but that's kinda hard to do on her own. Velo has her own morals and is trying her hardest to keep to them.

Fears: Losing her necklace, losing her morals and humanity, being executed by the Empire

Backstory: Velouria is simply another victim to the Empire's conquest for power. She comes a continent across the ocean, the one the Yaran empire originated. Her home was called Ylisse. It was a peaceful nation filled with scholars who had a thirst for knowldege. Whether it was magical or not it didn't matter to them. So when the empire started its reign it began with little Ylisse. They stood no chance as villages were burned and cities were nothing but rubble. The empire gained its thirst for blood their and took the people as slaves.

Since she was a little girl Velouria has watched and assisted the empire in its conquest. What choice did she have? She was a slave with no home to go back to. Sure people rebelled but Velo knew how useless it was to try to fight back when they had no advantage. So years passed as she proved herself as a slave and then a knight. Now she fights along the front lines hoping to gain her freedom by proving her skill. That was her goal anyway...seeing the poor magical folk of this rich magical continent chained up and used as pets had changed her yet again.

She couldn't understand the purpose behind all of this and tried to find answers. All she got was that magic was vile and it shouldn't exist. For weeks Velouria has been plagued by the sight of seeing innocents rounded up and executed simply for being what they were. Finally she snapped one day and released a group of forest folk back into the nearby forest. Sadly she couldn't go with them as she gave herself up to stop the pursuit. Now she awaits for he sentence of a public execution.

Appearance: She stands at about 5'3.
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Re: [CS] Guardians Of Magic

Post by HoneyBuzz » Sun Apr 01, 2018 4:57 pm

Oh it doesn’t give her any abilities! It’s just for show, really! And she’s not the only albino of her people, more or less just one of her surviving ones. And yea I can definitely age her up.

On an added note, I’m going to make the tail be black due to her magic choice, with little sparkles in it if that makes more sense!
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Re: [CS] Guardians Of Magic

Post by KittycatCookie » Sun Apr 01, 2018 5:05 pm

Accepted! We already worked thru your cs after all ^^

And P4perclips, I'm glad you're so ready to cooperate ^^ Your character is definitely accepted as well, she looks super interesting!
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Re: [CS] Guardians Of Magic

Post by HoneyBuzz » Sun Apr 01, 2018 5:12 pm

I enjoyed making her more than Briar, so I should have much more fun
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Re: [CS] Guardians Of Magic

Post by FlorenceRP » Sun Apr 29, 2018 2:59 am

TBD
"A Guardian's purpose is rising his shield to protect, pulling his sword to defend. It's the only goal we have in life. Without that... what am I besides nothing?"

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Name
Warden
Nickname
Previously The Guardian, currently The Disgraced.
Age
Around 100+. Guardians are supposed to live as long as their Guarded does, but Warden is currently not tied to any life.
Gender
Agender, uses male pronouns.
Sexual Orientation
Pansexual, directly tied to the gender of the one they guard. Falling in love with a Guarded is not only acceptable but encouraged, as it's yet another tie between the two beings.
Race
= GUARDIAN =

Guardians are a mysterious race of shadow people, born in the darkest parts of the Heriolian Continent. Currently, their numbers are set around 100 Guardians, and no one knows exactly what causes them to be born. Despite their seemingly cold personality, the goal of a Guardian is something fully empathetic: their destiny is becoming the Guardian of a being from another race. The biggest happiness conceived to a Guardian is the finding of a Guarded, the being they shall protect for the rest of their years.

Failure to protect a Guarded is unacceptable. A Guardian must see that their Guarded dies of old age, or never dies in case they are ageless. If one Guardian fails their eternal mission, they are deemed "A Disgraced". Most Guardians with the misfortune of that fate end their lives soon after receiving the title. The ones who don't are forever known for their shame and failure, never allowed to return to their people. Their powers are also severely impacted.

The only way for A Disgraced to return to their status as A Guardian is finding a second Guarded. But that is a very rare occurrence.

Previous Occupation
Guardian, keeper of life.
Inventory
Warden doesn't have much besides for his armor, sword and shield. The little money he has was given as a gift from his previous Guarded, along with a small locket he keeps concealed under his chestplate.
Magic / Skills:
Magic
- Short Range Telepathy -
As soon as a Guardian finds his Guarded, he gets the ability to connect to them through his thoughts, no matter how far a Guarded is. But when a Guarded dies that ability is broken, and turns into a short ranged ability to connect with any person mentally instead.

- Intangible Touch -
Being born in darkness, Guardians can be as untouchable as a shadow for a short time. This power can expand to other beings, but will absorb a lot of energy and can't be used for long.

- Healing Touch -

Skills
- Sword and Shield -
A weak Guardian is useless. How can one be expected to protect others, if they can't protect themselves? With that in mind, they are trained in the ways of the sword and shield from a very young age. By the time they find their charge, a Guardian is already one with the sword.
Personality
Cold, lacking empathy, insensitive. These are all words one could use to describe Warden when they meet him for the first time. None of it is true. While he seems to have trouble expressing his emotions externally, and even understanding the feelings of others, he still has kindness and care in his heart. A Guardian is born to appreciate life, to turn his years towards defending it. And Warden understands that concept.

While he previously carried a fully confident stance, insecurity took over him as soon as his Guarded died. He searches life for a purpose, trying to understand why he still deserves to be living.
Fears
Failure, Fire, and specially finding a second Guarded and allowing them to die again.
Backstory
If asked what the happiest moment of his life was, Warden wouldn't hesitate. He would immediately say it was the ritual of bonding, the moment his soul and her soul became connected for the rest of their mortal existence.
Everything that came before that couldn't compare, and everything after she died seemed like it lacked in color. The first years of his life were spent in quiet training and contemplation. The land of the Guardians is as peaceful as a forest can be, not even tainted by the light of sun. That, the brightness, he only came to appreciate afterwards. But initially all his focus was in his sword training, and gaining the perfect form to defend himself and someone.
It took decades for him to find his Guarded, and when he did, he almost thought it was funny that his life was attached to that small girl, one that didn't hesitate to hit him when she thought he was annoying and refuse his help when he offered to be her Guardian. It took months for her to come around, the time it took for them to become friends and for her to trust him.
Allana.
When the ritual of Bonding was complete, she became the most important part of his life. She was a warrior, loving her battles as much as she loved the world, so he followed her into the battlefield. He knew the danger, but he ignored it. He only wanted her to be happy, because what previously was a duty of his race had quickly developed into love. Some said Guardians saw the world in black and white, but she was color. All the color he had. She taught him to appreciate the world besides the dark forest of his people, and together they work to win many battles.
When she died, Warden knew his life was over. His purpose of protecting had failed. But he didn't end his existence. Because she asked him a last wish, and he had to follow her will.
Warden was disgraced by his people as a failure, his faith to always be known as the one who lost his Guarded, and never allowed to return to his people. Yet he kept going, because that's what Allana wanted of him.
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Re: [CS] Guardians Of Magic

Post by FlorenceRP » Sun Apr 29, 2018 3:00 am

Hi Kitty! Before I finish this, is this race acceptable?
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