Annasiel's Portfolio

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Post by Annasiel » Wed Jun 27, 2018 12:07 pm

Five. Four. Three.

Excess.

Six. Seven. Eight.

Release.

Five. Four. Three.

Excess.

Six. Seven. Eight.

Release.

It's a bad sign.
Sounding out a call for the last time
Waiting for the chimes to line up with a
Full stein
Top your glasses
Cause the countdown's imminently
Eminent -
Hell-bent klaxons bear benevolence
Recompense owed to the world of the excess

Six. Seven. Eight.

Release the beast trapped below our feet
Rain fire and brimstone while our champagne flows
-this ain't survival
Eye of the Tiger
It's the championing kings all ringing "Blow that City Wider"
In conquest
Hitting on the apex
Sitting ducks don't lay eggs
No, there's no hope for them, it's too late
Not a chance for rebate
Not a chance for mistakes -

Just sound the countdown.

Five. Four. Three.

Excess.

Six. Seven. Eight.

Release.

Five. Four. Three.

Excess.

Six. Seven. Eight.
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Post by Annasiel » Wed Jun 27, 2018 12:16 pm

I have no fucking idea what I just wrote.
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Re: Annasiel's Portfolio

Post by Shinigami » Wed Jun 27, 2018 6:04 pm

IDK, but I like the tempo. Was singing it in my head. :3
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Post by Annasiel » Sat Jul 14, 2018 3:30 am

An eve of life's endeavor
Intrudes the morning light
While only shrouds of shapeless clouds
Pervade my aimless sight
I reach into the sea of mists
To seek imagined glow
But only serve to drag myself
To the weighted depths below

Beneath the pain of longing
Beyond the scope of doubt
I part my lips to shriek for sight
But nary raise a shout
And so I close my soft-set eyes
Drift into abyss
And wait to find eternal rest
In solace - gentle kiss.
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Post by Rorschach » Sat Jul 14, 2018 4:40 am

I don't know what is required from a poem but I do know about rhymes

Endeavor but left to surrender,
Its hard to remember the lights ember,
Slender shapeless December,
Sight of another together,
Cold weather and mist,
This wrist glows this blackness,
You bring myself to sadness,
Below the surface is madness,
Tell me, what do you see?

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Post by Annasiel » Sat Jul 14, 2018 4:43 am

Very nice! I quite like the consonance. You should start up a poetry thread of your own~
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Post by Rorschach » Sat Jul 14, 2018 5:01 am

In other words you are like get the fk out my thread, I can see it now
You stand center room furious at my illiteracy and with a hand raised you yell, "Bih, the door!"
Lol but thanks, I tried to use you poem to create my frankstein there while simultaneously signing a record deal with Good music xd
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Post by Annasiel » Sat Jul 14, 2018 5:07 am

Ooooor I liked it and I'm telling ya to make more? >->
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Post by Svisttt » Sat Jul 14, 2018 5:21 am

AAH these are so good I love reading through all of them
"hold me,
whatever lies beyond this morning
is a little later on."

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Post by Annasiel » Wed Jul 18, 2018 8:37 am

I see the globe
In echo eyes
I call between
But they don't know
Which call is mine
And which is free
Beyond the cold
And hold of time
But still I seek
To quickly throw
My life-love rhyme
Beyond the peak
And wait below
In rapt divine
Until I reap
Until I reap
Whatever rhyme
Has sowed
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