Snake's depressive corner

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Re: Snake's depressive corner

Post by Snake Eyes » Fri Mar 31, 2017 10:54 pm

To love, is wanting to give your whole being to someone, and be satisfied with only a crumb of them in return. To care is to charge at your beloved, even if they hold a sword pointed at you, impaling yourself, if only to get another inch closer.

I have lost all my battles...
I've given up the war...
It's hard sketching a smile...
With a heart that beats no more...

So please...
Reattach those cut strings...
And I'll accept fate...
With whatever it brings...

Let me be your marionette...
And guide me with your hand...
Otherwise ill fade on the winds...
Scatter like ash and sand...

Gaze at me again...
And give me one last chance...
So that you may play...
And I may dance...
And so, they became strangers again.

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Re: Snake's depressive corner

Post by Snake Eyes » Tue Apr 18, 2017 8:05 am

I've just gotten to finishing this a day before Easter. It was something I started making about fifty days ago. It was supposed to be hollow on the inside in order to hold a necklace, and have another panel with another image on the back, to sort of look like a book. Don't know how I planned on doing that, since the only thing I do worse than drawing is carpentry. This was my 10th try to make something resembling a flower.
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Post by Snake Eyes » Wed Jul 05, 2017 8:41 pm

"Ah, gather around, let me tell you a story! And i promise it won't be boring, need not to worry. Of how a young lass, though an object tough, shattered like glass. So listen closely..." He whispered trough a hiss. "If i remember, it goes like this: On a January day, one cold night, under a dying star, that still shone bright, a single word flew over the rocky sea, sealing a fate, though not with glee. He thought too big, He aimed too high, blind to reality lurking just nigh. Now let me tell you..." The storyteller said. "From every lie, His heart bled. She didn't care, for She was wise, beyond Her years, cheeks untouched, by heavy tears. Heart unmoved, by vainful plea, She just wane, letting Him be. As He faded, down on His knees, a chill ran trough His spine, brought by a breeze." Unlike Her, i'll give you a chance, so take a guess, who counsels us, when we are a mess? "Stepmother Life pats His back, as she draws near, whispering wise words, into His ear: Foolish boy, don't you know, you were just a toy, if you jump, you'll crash down, attempt to swim you'll only drown."

"So take heed reader, and learn from this, less you're the next, who'll be amiss. Even if, the strongest muscle, give your heart, and it will crumble~"
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Re: Snake's depressive corner

Post by Bitten Wolf » Thu Jul 06, 2017 1:39 am

Still as well written as ever my darling. And I like the flower you "attempted" to draw, better than I would have done.
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Re: Snake's depressive corner

Post by Snake Eyes » Thu Jul 06, 2017 1:08 pm

Your praise always brings me a smile~

Also, the flower isn't drawn, it is carved into the wood.
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Re: Snake's depressive corner

Post by Bitten Wolf » Thu Jul 06, 2017 7:19 pm

Still way better than me. I can't carve wood for my life.
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Re: Snake's depressive corner

Post by Snake Eyes » Sun Jul 16, 2017 8:30 am

Sometimes, though this may be a sin, i just can't stop myself from wondering - just why? You took away grandpa, you took away auntie, you took away my father, you took away my best friend, and now her. I never asked for much, you know that my childhood is comparable to a generic character's tragic biography. Yet, i never questioned you. I was sure, no, i knew that you always had a plan for me, i was sure in your guidance. Did i not devote my future to celebrating your name, your mercy? Did i not pray enough? Is it because i was late for the service a few times? Did i not sing hard enough? Did i not give every fiber of my being? I just don't know anymore... i keep thinking that no matter how hard do the fires of hell burn, they'd fade when compared to this torture.


Hey love...
You know I hate goodbyes...
So I’ll be short...
Just look me in the eyes...
Show me that smile...
One that always rose me to a height...
So I could gaze it for a while...
Before fading into the night...
Give me your hand...
It’s warmth I wish to hold...
For where I’m going...
It’ll always be cold...
Whisper a last word into my ear...
Because when silence screams...
I won’t be able to hear...
And if you can...
Shed a false tear...
Razors on my wrists count days...
For my end is near...
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Re: Snake's depressive corner

Post by Snake Eyes » Sat Jul 29, 2017 10:53 pm

Tick, tock, tick, tock...

Sleep tight young one...
Close thine eyes and have no fear...
The pain is almost gone...
Your end draws near...
Just be a little brave...
For it is colder here...
Than in the frigid grave...
What is an ember, compared to the sear..?
It will only take one small step...
Ore one tiny cut...
To melt the phantom lead...
Weighting your gut...
To purge the sin...
One you never made...
This memory is the last...
Before you fade...


If only the blade would be happy with one...

Though not only you...
Hang on a string...
Think of them...
What will it bring..?
A branding word...
The weight of shame...
Red as they speak...
What was once your name...
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Re: Snake's depressive corner

Post by Bitten Wolf » Sun Aug 06, 2017 5:47 pm

These always make me feel such emotion. Excellent job once again darling. Only thing I noticed wrong was a couple missed use words. "Close thy eyes" should be "close thine eyes." Simple mistakes. But nonetheless, beautiful.
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Re: Snake's depressive corner

Post by Snake Eyes » Thu Sep 28, 2017 10:51 pm

“She was so cold, so frighteningly calm, as she ignored the heart that died on her palm. She stomped it down, down in the dirt. Was that love…? God it hurt.”

“Ah child, you just delayed that one day, when you had to learn, your lesson the hard way.”

“It all happened so fast. Tell me, was I a fool, hoping it to last?”

“You should, already know, without water, a rose can’t grow. If not tended, a flower won’t bloom, all you did, was build your own tomb. Know that it takes more than will, to build a house, because the world is a cat, and you are the mouse.”

“I still can’t, quite understand, to say what she did, what forced her hand?”

“An abyss divides you, foolish whelp, don’t pray to your God, he won’t help! You were from, two worlds far, what once shined bright, is now a dead star.”

“We had our, differences stark, yet she was still, my light in the dark.”

“You torture yourself, yet seek aid? Do as you will, but you will fade.”

“What is there to fade, an empty shell? My chest is a hole, a bottomless well. The future is blank, don’t you see? If I am to perish, let it be.”

“So you say, feeding that lie. But you still can’t, afford to die. What of your hopes, what of your dreams? Tomorrow may not be, like it seems.”

“They are no more, eaten by rust. What were once dreams, now are dust. ”

“You speak of pain, yet you still sing, salvation lies, in releasing that string.”

“I can’t let go, this last hope, because otherwise, I won’t be able to cope.”

“Do you not see? How this has turned dire? It’s not a string, but barbed wire!”

“Compared to that, this pain is but a pang, her words stab harder, than any steel fang.”

“But why let it, stab at all? Trough darkness it leads, to an imminent fall.”

“I don’t concern myself, with matters such, after all, I’ve lost so much. If I thought, of such things, I’d just dread, what the future brings. ”


“We feel bad, watching you go, but to all advices, you just said no. Unlike you, on the wind she doesn’t sway, because you are just a bad memory, best locked away. It is as if, you never came to exist, now go back, wander in your mist. Just know that she erased you, it’s all the same, just give a few more months, and she’ll forget your name.
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